Freestyle Battle!!!!!

Anybody wanna spit some bars and get a cypha goin?
Consider it an open mike type thing.
*NO HATERS ALLOWED*
-not everyone has skillz here...but we wanna let EVERYONE express freely even if they do suck. So plz no hating on each other-
BUT...i will say this:
If you make a move and diss someone else, all restrictions are off you put it on yourself if we all come back and diss you in return. So lets TRY 2 keep this friendly.

Sincerely,
Y-NOT

ROUND ONE!
lets go!!!!

My Shorty

Listen Up
Listen Up
Playa 4 Hire
cuz the official playa has officially retired
yea he finally found wifey nd he plans 2 stik by her
aint a shorty flyer
yea my shorty fire
Listen Up
Listen Up
tell me wats the deal
i wanna keep it real
nd tell u how i feel
but ur friends is gettin 2 u
talkin girl that nigga wack
playa this nd playa that
if i was u i wood step bak
nd i laugh
cuz it seems that they wood nevr tire
but aint a shorty flyer
yea my shorty fire

throw a 2nd verse on that...lets c how that work out

Quisqueya wrote:

My Shorty

Listen Up
Listen Up
Playa 4 Hire
cuz the official playa has officially retired
yea he finally found wifey nd he plans 2 stik by her
aint a shorty flyer
yea my shorty fire
Listen Up
Listen Up
tell me wats the deal
i wanna keep it real
nd tell u how i feel
but ur friends is gettin 2 u
talkin girl that nigga wack
playa this nd playa that
if i was u i wood step bak
nd i laugh
cuz it seems that they wood nevr tire
but aint a shorty flyer
yea my shorty fire

LISTEN UP
LISTEN UP
This player is neva retired
broke more hearts than goodyear got tires.
im flyer, and higher...upon anotha level
she think he's a saint, but he frontin like the devil, a rebel
so dont give em ya HEART GURL
he's got his pimp game down 2 an ART GURL
the type u neva catch slippin on his job
cheatin like he's breathin yea tha dude is a slob
a heart-throb, mess around and get ya heart robbed
popular thug thats got his own fan mob
LISTEN UP
LISTEN UP
you should stick wit a gentleman
the type that cares, & aint too judgmental man
i got a simple plan, i hope that u listenin
leave wit me, and ya smile will be glisteniin
i aint no cheater, i aint no liar
you seen my wallet gurl and...his is much lighter.
i'll be ya lover, i'll be ya fighter
he'll be ya faker cuz he's jus a paper tiger

no offense 2 ya bruh.
im sure u aint no cheater like that.
i jus always gotta go for the gurl.
we could make a battle track outta this.
it'll be like a rap version of Michael Jakcson's "The Girl is Mine" featuring Paul McCartney.
Them two dudes battled in a song over a chick too.
Dope concept yadig?

im feelin that lol that shyt is tuff

compare his money 2 my luv 4 u
obviously im richer
she really dont care 4 u dude
why cant u get the picture
c u try nd u try
but u dont seem 2 understand
that thru trials nd tribulations ima always be her man
i aint walk away from the game
baby i ran
they say a playa cant change
but baby i can
this love is lovely
i love u nd u love me
but this dude think he above me
simply cuz he got money
man u funny
fu** u nd ur wallet
the 1 thing that u cant give her
nigga i got it
talkin u make it rain
like u the big dipper
wtf u flashin money 4?
nigga she aint a stripper
the biggest catch of dem all
i've already caught
give it up lil homie
love cant be bought

DING DING DING!!!!

i cant even reply son.
u won that one fair and square.
called me on a serious flaw....CASH.
much respect my dude, much respect indeed.
i usually dont get ripped like that on a first timer but i gotta say i underestimated you.
aight next one aint gonna be so easy haha.
im steppin my game up.
consider yaself a worthy opponent, i aint holdin no punches now. lol

Y-NOT = 0
Steven = 1

but...who's really counting. lolz
aight u ready for round 2?

lets go...

thanx alot man..it means more kumin from sum1 who hold a deal

Aight, listen up fam gather round.
im bout 2 spit it sick but still keep it profound.
my sound is relative 2 the heat from undaground.
my opponent aint in my weight class but i'll crush em pound 4 pound.
Ya caught me off gaurd when we fought in round one.
dont start gettin cocky cuz its only begun.
shootin off at the mouth like a loaded gun
imma show u up on the mike while im still havin fun
neva break a sweat and i neva shed a tear,
neva show respect & haters kissin on my rear.
ya cronies stay yappin they be jockin on my gear.
but when i call em on it they back up smellin like fear.
So allow me 2 kick this off nice and slow.
cuz the skillz i got inside yous about 2 unfold
steppin against me u either dumb or jus bold
cuz i got more flows than a NIKE inc. got soles.

listen up homie
yea ur verse is fine
ur flow alrite but its nuthin like mine
i been surpassed greatness nd ur fallin behind
i drop bombs in evry line
c i tried 2 be kind
u gangsta
but ima mobster
its on u
u jus unleashed a lyrical monster
yea i won the first battle
nd ima win the next
nd the next 1 after that
cuz simply im the best
im not shittin on ur skillz
u still get ur respect
so go head
do u thing
cash ur chek
u got lil paper soldiers
while i got cavalry
we causin crazy damage
man ur crew dont wanna battle me
so pik the time nd the place
it dont matter where the stage is
i got more punch lines
then the internet got pages

u say u droppin bombs within ya every line
but if u observe my area everything is fine
everything is clear, everything is calm
u jus spittin rap lines, but i drop poetic psalms
dont disrespect me or ya face'll read my palm
in other words "smack!" my pimp hand is south paw
u say that u a mobster, a lyrical monster
but i own the BEAST league, sucka u aint on my roster
it was luck you won the first and u neva will again
the only reason i went easy is cuz CINDY call u a friend.
so...let me begin...
by sayin i aint no joke when it comes 2 my pen.
and lest you forget,
in order 2 beat me freestylin u gonna need divine intervention.
not 2 mention
i punish u like bad kids in class, you got lyrical detention
keep runnin ya mouth i'll call for an extension
listen
but lemme slow down on handin you these daily rhyme pensions
its too much for ya minuscule brain's retention.

Y-Not
tell me Y-U Not hot
not only im i on the Beast League roster
i took ur spot
obviously u gon be mad
u must feel sum kinda way
so u gon make a rap
wit sum s2pid shyt 2 say
listen here
try 2 be a lil more diverse
how u nice?
i fell asleep half way thru ur verse
i dont wanna converse
now ima shoot u in the throat
talkin bout u gon smack me
im the wrong dude 2 provoke
u took it 2 far now
c wat u dun did
talkin all this shyt
bout puttin ur hands on the kid
i tried 2 show u respect
now ur faced gon be disfigured
nd after i do that
ima piss on u nigga
im in the race 4 the throne
u aint in nuthin but a fag race
now tell me
Tony how my ass taste?

yo, gotta give props for that Shaq line 4rel
but lets be honest how many albums he sell?
dont even answer that cuz i dont wanna hurt ya feelings
compare our sales and mine are threw the ceilings
callin me a homo, u say im in a fag race?
im not the one askin dudes how my ass taste
imma call it the way it really be
cuz u the one sayin u gonna piss all ova me
so kick back R.Kelly or am i givin you 2 much credit
yea, u more like Michael Jackson, but u the one who said it
u played yaself in a rhyme, now aint that a shame
the only fool i kno that kicks his own ass in the rap game
i aint even have 2 fight, or pull out my guns
cuz this dude cracked on himself wit all these homo puns
like u said awhile back, you aint the one 2 provoke
i aint even even battlin u cuz this thang became a joke
talkin bout i aint diverse and u feel asleep in my verse
so lemme be terse and spit sumthin that really hurts
u say u took my spot upon the BEAST roster
but your name's on the guest list i invited u for pasta
that is what u fake goons eat right...or is it lobsta?
either way betta fatten up...cuz sucka i eat mobsters.

evrybody join me
lets clap 4 a sec
thats a bout the only good verse this man gon get
u came at me crazy
im feelin that dude
so it seems Mr.DR gon have 2 get rude
homie called me R.Kelly
haha thats funny
but u the 1 sittin there
face full of piss dummy
he said i'm more like Michael Jackson
haha thats funny
but only becuz my rhymes are rapin u buddy
YEA u gotta be diverse
im jus trynna help u friend
see
u made me fall asleep all over again
as far as me bein gay
theres jus 1 thing i gotta say
how is that me nd ur moms is meetin up 2 day ?
o yea we gon play
dude throw ur sheets away
cuz im bout 2 go disrespectful
nd FU** ON UR BED ok
nd while im doin ur moms
u can go chill wit ur crew
ur lil faggot friends
nd do w/e faggots do
compare ur record sales 2 shaqs
nd urs are thru the roof
but if i had a deal
i'd bury em homie
nd thats the truth
here's proof
that im the best
theres nuthin left 2 say
put ur pen down
matter fact
throw that shyt away
man i dun joined the mafia
so eat mobster all u want
ima haymaker
u aint nuthin but a taunt
he said he aint have 2 fight
or pull out his gun
talkin shyt in ur raps
but wen u c me u run
so this is how its gon go
in the next rhyme u spit
ima raise my hand in triumph
cuz Y-Not Quit

outta all the lines u done spit, bruh these lines were the weakest
i was tryna be humble, i was tryna be the meekest
cuz u aint evolved into me yet, u still a fetus
a baby in the game, still suckin on the Teetus
thats why u want my mama...cuz u already kno that she breed us
HAHA!
Champs like me dont neva quit
so cut it wit all this hand-raisin bullsh**
im endin this battle and u already kno this
jus look at the crowds cheer...havent u noticed
ya rap game is bogus, ya need 2 get focused
and kno that u aint the only rapper i done told this
they fronted so i made em disappear like hocus-pocus
so heed my advice, "chu fu**ing cockroachez!!"
Thats right im like Scarface on the mike
minus all at bullet-holes but still all the fight
say hello 2 my lil friend and my big one too
got an A-bomb and a rocket launcha...what u bring wit u?
u wish u had a deal but if u did what wud you do?
u wudnt kno the first thing bout runnin no crew.
and u talkin bout im chillin wit faggot friends and more
its funny u should say that cuz they all friends of yours
so i implore you 2 reconsider when u say that i bore
cuz the millions of my fans neva sleep on my tours
u jus cant stay awake cuz thats jus what todlers whine for
go get ya bottle son
u dont wanna battle son
i murked u without even goin full throtle son
so the next time you come by talkin all this whack noise
rememba i dissected ya ryhme like cheap american toys
u wish u cud rhyme wit my finesse and poise
but you a mime on the mike...b**ch you aint got no VOICE.

R.I.P my dude...

listen here scarface
u dun made me go Soprano
i was cockin up the shotgun slowly loadin up my ammo
im the tuffest animal u'll evr try 2 tame
the only shyt ur momma evr breeds is a buncha lames
see scarface
u numb from all the coke
talkin bout u out on tour yet u still broke
who the fu** says hocus pocus?
u lame ass lozer
nigga i chose 2 battle
u a beggar not a choser
A-bomb nd a rocket launcher nigga please
my o so fly barrier deflect that wit ease
talkin bout u aint go full throttle
nigga who has?
this here is nitro
u dun wasted ur gas
its been good scarface
battlin nd all
this the shotgun 2 ur bak that leads 2 ur fall
talkin im a mime on the mic
i dont gotta voice
but u gon bow 2 the king homie u dont have a choice
i think R.I.P was the words that u stated
im sorry 2 say i jus reincarnated
''i want the world chico nd evrythin in it ''
all u gon get is lyrical bullets infinit
this last shot is fatal u wont make it 2 the clinic
they gon give u an open casket nd ima piss in it
this shyts been finished
stop talkin all this trash b4 u get yoked up
talkin bout ur millions of fans
then u woke up
u say ur faggot friends are all friends of mine nigga stop
i think that u mita had me mistaken wit ur pops
tell ur moms 2 chill
why she keep on buggin me?
ur not my fuckin kid
ur too damn ugly
listen here
ur rhymes are trash
u jus got thrashed
nd u still aint deny that u lick maaa ass
listen here lil homie
u still not diverse
nd i aint need dem big words 2 shyt on ur verse
Goddamn man
why u so fuckin borin
ur first verses jus dazed me
this shyt had me snorin
my lines are still scorin
my rhymes are still porin
i jus rocked u 2 the core
nd if u decide 2 write back
i got more rhymes in store
u got ur lil rap book
i got binders nd folders
mite as well go 2 sleep
man i won this
its ovr

im takin back what i said bout ur previous lines being the weakest cuz...

Your last entry was by far the worse
so whack it made me wanna curse
ill reverse your verse place you in that hurse
and hurt your work
like service after church wants you in the dirt
R.I.P {...again}
talkin bout u gonna kill me? PLEASE. u got me laffin
couldnt kill me if you were anthax in a napkin,
sent in by an afghan,
u a has been
lies followed by lies,
ill unmask sin,
battle me? is this sumthin you really shud be askin?
tell me this...you were hot back WHEN?
back when dinosaurs where attackin?
Jurassic u get your ass kicked!
gymnastics are for girls who practice
it would be as tragic as a miss judged back flip,
off a mattress and the dresser smacks lips,
im sick as sluts on judge Hatchet
only this right here aint no act [beep],
so ruthless i beat ya ass wit tennis rackets! lmao
u unprepared so u must not know me
im prepared like a chef at a 5 star restaurant while u just Shoneys
been exposed for a Phoney,
more fillers then baloney,
and homey...
unless you plan 2 swallow
then dont blow me
ur ryhmes so minimal, one sylabal,
its fun killin you, dumb little fool,
im gettin rid of you
pointless, like dividing one inta 2
whats inta you, individual, pitiful
who leaves my ritual in ridicule
work on it and get your tools
i write psalms & part seas
in my palm i spark treez
i spit wit ease but you fart breeze
sour like a tart treat
never let your heart speak
or ill eat it like dark meat
u garbage hardly even part weak
i bring the heat dude, meet proof,
i speak truth u could fit both your feet, in each boot
cudnt fill my shoes,
like "honey shrunk the people"
so unless you wanna be stuffed in a trunk of a beetle
position being fetal
til i can comeback wit a sequel
thats equal
to the one that just beat you
then keep your beak glued
come back to the trunk and release you
cuz i seek 2 eat fools
like blood suckin mosquitoes
fast as you and i on beef stew
so if you can really beat me...why havent you?

IIght so thats all ya gettin off of us 4 free lol...the battle is ovr ...its time 4 u 2 vote who the winner is..ur open 2 share ur opinions on the battle, even make suggestions 4 any future battles...soooooo yea...u do that

Jus like my boi Steve said, NO MORE WITHOUT PAYIN. lolz
make up ya minds and vote who u think won overall.
jus hit up this topic wit a name of who won aight.
Tell ya friends and get them 2 read and vote too.
PEACE